Waaaaay too big!!! Need to be able to access each point of the menu while reading each section..
- Good nav system for the sub points, can see everything and go on to the next menu item
-maybe needs more colour?
- The "issues" and "outcomes" need to be way more obvious, they are more important hierarchically and so need to be more obvious.
- Much better size but still needs some adjustment... should I do maybe some buttons at the top, one "issue" and one "outcome"...? hmmmmm Or a button at the bottom of the issues page that leads to "outcomes" ... maybe need that in the big thingy at the top. uh...
like this?
- Apparently an Intro paragraph is a very good idea because otherwise people have no idea what you are talking about!
- ! Make sure text lines up on each page... ! Standardise all illustration sizes